Q15: Does this statement provide Graduates and the Association with sufficient focus?

The Association shall be dedicated to furthering the ideals and promoting the welfare of the United States Military Academy.

[001]  1. AOG should be dedicated to representing USMA Graduates.

[002]  seems vague --

[003]  ", while serving also to meet the needs of graduates for information about classmates, other graduates, the Corps of Cadets and the Academy."

[004]  Ironically it says nothing about the grads which leaves the AOG management, most who directly retire from the military to work for the AOG, to act as if they are still in the military and as so responsive to the Sup! They are not an honest buffer between the Academy/Sup and the graduates which is why I think grads are so unsupportive of AGO.

[005]  The primary goal should be maintaining ties among, and serving the needs of, the graduates of West Point.

[006]  I think additional focus is warrented for the welfare of the *graduates* that make up the association.

[007]  Seems that as an association of graduates the idea of fellowship among this group should be included. Not sure what words you'd want to use, but fellowship, comradery, pulling the graduate community together, ect should be part of a graduate associations goals.

[008]  Maintaining and facilitating contact with alumni Job assistance upon trasition

[009]  I a primary function of AOG now is to provide serives and assistance to graduates. This is different from the two tenets of the current purpose, and I think it should be included in the purpose.

[010]  add: to the US Army and the Nation

[011]  If promoting the welfare of the US Military Academy includes promoting the welfare of the graduates, then the statement is ok as is. However, the institution is more than the gray granite walls of West Point - it includes the entire Long Gray Line. The focus should be on the people, rather than the institution.

[012]  Yes to furthering to ideals of the Academy, and the welfare of the USMA, but what about it's Gaduates? How about promoting the welfare of the Grads, both active Military and Civilian. What more can we do to make an officer's or former officer's quality of life, or career improve. Closer association among grads seems to be part of the solution. Also, how does the above Purpose Statement compare to a high-quality civilian school? Can we learn anything from them?

[013]  Mention strengthen the bonds among graduates. Provide a forum for graduates to support the Academy's goals. Provide important information to graduates.

[014]  Is the AOG a tool of West Point or its Graduates

[015]  Some indication of what these ideals are, or a reference to where they are expressed (such as the Mission that I remember being memorized - 'The mission of the United States Military Academy is to instruct and train...'

[016]  communication misison fund-raising mission

[017]  In my opinion the purpose statement should read, " the associaton shall be dedicated to furthering the ideals and promoting the welfare of the United States Military Academy, and its graduates."

[018]  Attention should be paid in the mission to assist graduates thruout their lives and careers.

[019]  by continuing comunication with the classes.

[020]  I do not know what the AOG actually does or how it interprets its "purpose statement". The only thing I know for certain is that I can contact it to buy memorabilia from the gift shop. I know nothing about who makes up the AOG board, how they are selected or what they actually do.

[021]  The word "welfare" has a negative connotation, despite its noble purpose.

[022]  You seem to have become a collection agency. Most of the communciations that I receive from the AOG has to do with fund raising rather than information about what is going on at the Academy. If that's part of your mission it should be clearly spelled out in your mission statment. I don't agree with that being your function but that is what it appears to be!

[023]  As written, it is too vague and can mean anything to whoever wants to use it -- make it more specific -- what does "promoting the welfare" mean?

[024]  add to end of sentence. "and its ultimate objective to train defenders of the Nation and the Constitution of the United States of America."

[025]  I see no evidence of either clause in execution. All you do is solicit money for jocks and to sustain yourselves.

[026]  I am confused as to the meaning of "Purpose", "Goal", "Objective" and "Mission". I'd like the definitions of all before completing this and the following Q. For example, USMA itself had both a mission and a purpose. I understand and hope that the present Supe is eliminating "purpose" and redefining the "Mission". Do we in the AOG use "Purpose" instead of "Mission"?

[027]  I don't see where the AOG takes a strong stand in support of people and/or actions that are threatened by those who do not place the Academy above self. For example, The Col. James Hallums case.

[028]  It should mention something about furthering the welfare of the graduates!

[029]  . . . welfare of the cadets and staff of . . .

[030]  I believe the AOG should reflect the wishes of its members. For instance, it is my understanding that the "Official" position of the AOG on the Regular Commission Problem is one of "Hands Off", "Don't do Anything." In my view, that position will lead to the demise of USMA. The Jack Hallums incident was another case of AOG timidity. I believe most of my Clasmates feel that Hallums was screwed, and the Supe did a poor job of handling the entire incident. The Supe now has a good sounding board with the advent of e-mail, and he should start listening!

[031]  1) Perhaps we should strengthen our resolve and not only "promote" but "provide" 2) We should also promote or provide for the welfare of graduates of USMA.

[032]  The goals should not be able to shift with the wind of political correctness. The AOG should represent the graduates of USMA and not be an extension of the current Supe.

[033]  Make it active. The AOG shall dedicate its engergy and resources to furhtering the ideals and promoting the welfare of the USMA.

[034]  I don't think the focus should be on "the academy". Rather it should be focused on ensuring the cadets are getting what is needed to help them achieve the academy goals. As written, we could do lots of things to improve the welfare of the academy, but might not do a single thing to improve the product -- namely the graduates and cadets.

[035]  The actual function of the AOG, as I see it, is as a fundraiser for usma Supes. I get a fund raising letter or tour package almost every other week. Rarely does a document come from AOG that does not ask for a donation, a trust set up, etc.

[036]  What are the ideals? Sounds a little too etherial. How about supporting and furthering the careers of graduates while supporting the mission of USMA and promoting its welfare.

[037]  Brevity is the soul of wit _ this is a fine statement

[038]  Greatest focus should be adherence to our oath to support and defend the Constitution, against all enemies, foreign and domestic. This oath appears to be overlooked in the globalist policies supported by the association and senior officers.

[039]  Providing services to graduates

[040]  It is certainly a catch-all! And it sounds like a State Welfare Program!

[041]  Provide: 1. preservation of USMA. 2. preservation of the "old corps" standards and traditions.

[042]  It is a good vision but needs more specifics in the form of goals and objectives

[043]  support to/of graduates

[044]  welfare of cadets and graduates of etc

[045]  The purpose statement is fine, however, I would suggest a direct reference to supporting graduates (being the Association of Graduates).

[046]  I'd like to see phrasing that emphasizes service to USMA graduates.

[047]  ...and it's graduates...

[048]  Our era of unprecedented moral decline leads me to believe that the mission should focus on "preserving" as well as "furthering" the ideals of USMA.

[049]  It's good to focus Aog activities on the Academy, as opposed to the Army, the Dod, the Country. The others have their own constituencies, which include us, inter alia.

[050]  and to assist fellow graduates in need.

[051]  I would not want to delineate the mission any further as to do so would constrain possible avenues of thought and action.

[052]  Include "duty, honor, country" as ideals, and promoting cadets and graduates along with USMA.

[053]  delete "furthering the ideals amd promoting"

[054]  Support and representation of the AOG membership itself, and the strategic direction of the Academy should be stated in some manner as being the primary focus of the mission statement.

[055]  Need "ideals" and "welfare" defined. You seem to be assuming that we know what you mean when you use these terms. We, all of us, might entertain totally distinct perceptions of these terms.

[056]  There seems to be little focus beyond rubber stamping the current initiatives that the acting SUPE, COM and DEAN have on the agenda. I would like to see an AOG that exists to help support each other and foster common bonds.

[057]  "welfare" seems a bit weak; need to be more specific; i.e., insure the perpetual financiial security of, continued National suppot of, etc.

[058]  The Association shall be dedicated to providing the means and resources by which USMA graduates may continue to serve their country, the USMA and their fellow graduates.

[059]  How about adding " and its graduates." to the end? I.E., not just the institution, but the people.

[060]  Reference to people, e.g., "cadets and graduates," does not appear in the purpose statement.

[061]  Need to add points on what Association does for graduates.

[062]  Unfortunately, "Ideals and welfare" of USMA may not be universally sufficient to potential donors. For bricks and mortar projects, Grads should be able to know what they are donating for. In any case, always explain that Congress does/will not support the projects AOG is supporting.

[063]  Whatever

[064]  AOG should also help grads

[065]  "Ideals" ultimately means actions taken by people. Maybe the "support of people whose actions embody the ideals" of the USMA could be included.

[066]  Ideals should be stated so that people not associated with WP will be made aware of the standards you live and strive for.

[067]  ,,,ideals of the Long Gray Line and promoting.....

[068]  Insuring that our Congress does not dimiish the role of the Academy and its serving gaduates

[069]  "...furthering the ideals..." is vague. What ideals are you referring to? Answering that question would provide better focus to the association and to its graduates.

[070]  1.Delete "...dedicated". One can be "dedicated" and yet do nothing. Use "shall further the ideals". 2. change to: "....welfare of the United States Military Academy, its cadets, and its graduates, both active and retired." Present version absent "people factor".

[071]  Reflecting views of the graduates of USMA and communicating such views

[072]  Furthering communications with and success of graduates

[073]  Should also be concerned with the welfare and providing an on-going link to the graduates themselves Acknowledge that some graduates are/were Air Force officers (active and retired), so they should not be excluded in whatever language is used.

[074]  It should focus more narrowly toward goals and objectives that specifically promote welfare and further ideals of USMA.

[075]  I suggest adding "and its' gradutes"

[076]  Believe the statement should read: "The Association shall be dedicated to furthering the ideals and promoting AND SUPPORTING the welfare of the United States Military Academy." Reason: to clearly stipulate the overall support that can and should be provided by the AOG.

[077]  With my concerns in the previous note, I think that the very ideals of USMA are at stake. Furthering connotes a state of permanence and the furthering given that permanence. I believe ideals are priceless. Perhaps 'proof of ideals' should somehow precede furthering, because there are apparently those decision makers who do not appreciate the very existence of the Academy.

[078]  The Association IS dedicated to PROMOTE AND EXEMPLIFY the ideals of the United States Military Academy AND THE NATION IT SERVES.

[079]  Maintaining ties among graduates. Supporting classes and societies. Whole thing is now not useful as a guide to AOG leadership.

[080]  "..and its graduates."

[081]  I think there ought to be some mention of supporting and promoting the welfare of the graduates of USMA as well.

[082]  1. It should be responsible for maintaining the customs and history of USMA rather than justifying change. Those who have been in battle realize the importance of these customs. Liberalizing is of no value.

[083]  "....and graduates." should be added

[084]  Suggest the addition of the phrase "and its graduates". This phrase expands the mission to include furthering the ideals, and promoting the welfare of AOG members. I believe that this additional focus is needed. I also believe that some current AOG activities would be precluded under the current mission statement.

[085]  Selecting canidates who understand their obligation to the Academy and to their country.

[086]  It's lacking in focus, but more than makes up for that by being flexible. More focused purpose statements would soon be out of date.

[087]  Providing service/information to graduates

[088]  What the AOG does for graduates.

[089]  The AOG should also focus on "and providing support for its graduates around the world."

[090]  Not sure, current mission seems too broad.

[091]  Facilitate communications among grads, provide an input channel for grads to Academy leadership, provide forums for discussions critical to broad spectrums of grads: healthcare, jobs for riffed JMOs. Generally furthering the interests of GRADS.

[092]  Too broad and vague without knowing what the ideals of the academy are today. I know what I believe they should be. Again, AOG appears to be a mouthpiece for current Academy policies rather than a voice of graduates. It is ASSOCIATION OF GRADUATES.

[093]  NEED FOCUS ON THE GRADUATES, THEIR NEEDS AND THEIR POTENTIAL VALUE TO USMA (OTHER THAN ONLY THEIR ABILITY TO DONATE MONEY)

[094]  Try the standard who, what, when, where, and why formula. You've got the Who and What but the other three are missing. Be specific and cite examples.

[095]  "....and its' graduates." should be added to the end.

[096]  ...and also maintaining a healthy supportive external nework. I think if you do this right, money and support will follow. Don't do it right and the first purpose may not be executed well.

[097]  We should also help in shaping where West Point should be heading in the 21st Century

[098]  The Purpose Statement does not appear to encompass the activities that the AOG is pursuing in support of active duty and civilian graduates.

[099]  To broad. A purpose statement should say something that is tangible.

[100]  1. Needs to address the Army and its goals and ideas; 2. Needs to address graduate services and the role in providing a continuing connection between the Academy and its classes.

[101]  I feel that the purpose should state WHO the AOG supports, to be sure that the AOG or its members or classes or chapters do not think they run USMA

[102]  support graduates of USMA.

[103]  Too vague. This could incorporate anything. If can incorporate anything, why have a purpose statement in the first place? Narrow the focus.

[104]  It is focused entirely on the Academy. Perhaps the Association should also consider serving graduates. I think that is probably the disconnect with some of those who have left the service and the Academy is no longer central to their lives.

[105]  It is a little too broad - difficult to pin down what areas of "welfare" the AOG is targeting. Maybe this Purpose statement is acceptable, if refined by a yearly set of objectives...

[106]  not only the welfare of the Academy,BUT also the welfare of it's graduates.

[107]  While I agree that we should collectively work toward the stated goal, I think there is also a function of the Assoc to maintain linkages between and among graduates, which has inherent value distinct from our continued support to the institution.

[108]  "...and its graduates."

[109]  To what end is the Association dedicated to?

[110]  There should be mention of focus on the graduates of the Academy--being an information source to them.

[111]  Support (to include financial) of the institution and its programs.

[112]  AOG is a money generating apparatus by default.

[113]  The primary focus of the statement is "the Academy", and rightfully so. But, the AOG is an association of "graduates". The graduates are also of concern, and a "mission" of the association. I am only suggesting that the continued education of the graduates (concerning the Academy) is essential to the cohesiveness of the AOG.

[114]  With the work AOG now performs in assisting graduates in transition to the commercial sector from active duty, you may want to add the phrase: "...welfare of the United States Military Academy AND ITS GRADUATES."

[115]  There is no target audience. Is the target aurdience graduates (doubtful)? Future cadets (possible)? More widesrpread? I find that question unanswered.

[116]  Delete welfare. It sounds like an animal humane society.

[117]  "promoting the welfare of ..." is unclear. Normally, you promote the welfare of people, not institutions. Furthermore, a purpose statement should indicate action, and using "dedicated to" as the principal verb in the statement does not accomplish this. More importantly, does AOG just exist to support the Academy, or the nation and communities as well? I would be much more active if the local chapter united graduates in service to the community, and in so doing would reflect credit on the academy. A stronger, less self-serving statement would be, "The Association shall unite graduates of USMA in lifelong dedication to the Corps and to Duty, Honor, and Country."

[118]  It is not exciting and not specific. Need to rethink this generality of a Purpose statement. I say this even though I agree with what it says.

[119]  Promote contact between members of graduating classes

[120]  Promoting welfare of Grads should be included

[121]  To foster communication between graduates of the United States Military Academy.

[122]  Do not use the word welfare.

[123]  Need a vision statement as to what the AOG should strive to be

[124]  Add " and its graduates".

[125]  I think the statement should include something about maintaining the bond between USMA and its graduates.

[126]  If you want more involvement from people like me who are now contributing in the civilian world, then consider modifying the purpose to include furthering the ideals and promoting the welfare of USMA "AND its graduates around the world." I surely understand the focus on USMA, but (right or wrong) I feel like the academy will always be "ok. " However, the majority of graduates are now civilians and are attempting to make the business world more professional and ethical and thereby improve our society. It seems as if the AOG is only concerned with the hallowed grounds at West Point, which in the grand scheme have little impact on me and my efforts to make a contribution as a civilian.

[127]  There are probably more retired Grads than active Grads, so the AOG might acknowledge its service to graduates no longer in the Service, as well as to supporting the ideals of USMA.

[128]  And to serve as a network form which all graduates can pull from

[129]  The Association should promote a strong network for graduates, both military and civilian, in order to create a conduit for achieving the purpose above.

[130]  "and it Graduates."

[131]  In addition to: Provide a conduit from WP to graduates Promoting WP ideals from WP to the Army and civilian graduates.

[132]  This is only a very high level commanders intent (not a mission statement). To provide "finite direction" I would modify it to be more like a mission statement with clear and actionable terminology. A key point I would include in this mission statement would be something around connectivity and communication: "To provide a conduit for the interconnectivity and networking opportunities essential to continued promotion of Academy ideals and values in military and civilian society". Just a thought

[133]  The current statement may not be broad enough. Today the AOG dedicates a great amount of time and effort supporting its members, but that is not mentioned in its purpose statement.

[134]  if anything, focus is too narrow and ignores facilitating networking among grads to further the lessons and ideals learned at the Academy throughout the Army and the nation.

[135]  The AOG fosters communication between a unique group of American citizens accross the globe. The leveraging of that in the 21st century may not be adequately addressed under "furthering the ideals" section of the curent objective.

[136]  better link previous grads to new grads -

[137]  The statement is very vague. Who will "further the ideals and promote the welfare"... grads, the AOG staff? What is the overarching goal? Shouldn't that be in the statement?

[138]  Include "Graduates" as either proponents or recipients.

[139]  Graduates are not mentioned in the purpose statment. There should be some reference to what the association is supposed to do for graduates.

[140]  Words to the effect of helping graduates "network" with other graduates, especially those on Active Duty networking with graduates in the business sector,

[141]  What do you mean by promoting the welfare?

[142]  Add something about "the welfare of the United States MIlitary Academy, and its graduates" (this would also mean the family of graduates"

[143]  It is to general and depends on whose opinion is counted as what consititues "...furthering the ideals and promoting the welfare..." of the Academy.

[144]  What are "the ideals?" Why must we promote the welfare of the Academy? Should this not be something to the effect of promoting the welfare of the 'people' with the academy?

[145]  The assistance of graduates (job search, networking, information dissemination) is not referenced in the mission statement. While I agree with the current statement, I feel the statement should reflect how the Association of Graduates furthers graduates as well.

[146]  The statement is too broad and generic as to provide no focus whatsoever. While I don't have the definitive answer to what should take its place, something that more closely parallels the Academy mission, tied to service to the nation, is a good place to start.

[147]  Independent of the Supt and his staff

[148]  Furthing the ideals should include promoting hiring of grads into higher level more influential positions so that they may lead by example. West Point more than any other college appears to have a real problem with anything other than a good luck wish. The WPSNY networking meetings are at such a low level its pitiful, and I stopped dropping by two years ago.

[149]  Too Vague

[150]  Need to do a better job of presenting contributions of graduates to the nation and selling the benefits of maintaining the Academy as a premier national institution.

[151]  Remove the portion that sounds self serving i.e. "promoting the welfare of the USMA" to something that stresses serving the Nation and the Army by furthering the ideals and supporting USMA etc..

[152]  Assistance to graduates

[153]  Keeping Alumni informed on major trends at USMA and serve as the voice of the alumni in presenting views on controversial issues.

[154]  promoting the well being of graduates

[155]  Needs to emphasize continuing and promoting "Duty, Honor, Country."

[156]  What the desired end state is or should be.

[157]  What is meant by welfare of the Academy?

[158]  AOG should serve as a lifetime resource for USMA graduates (and graduates only) for professional (military and civilian) enrichment and social networking..

[159]  Not if "welfare of" means fund raising and trying to make West Point just like and other run of the mill College or University.

[160]  Who is the customer? The Grads. I see no mention of them. I am uncomfortable with the "promoting the welfare" clause, as opinions among grads vary considerably about what constitutes the welfare of the Academy. In particular, I do not want the AOG speaking on behalf of us about ANY political matters including federal funding levels for USMA.

[161]  The AOG and Academy are best embodied in the contributions members make daily -- help members network among themselves in "natural" small groups to achieve the Academy's "life Mission". The reputation of the Academy will prosper as a result. The AOG will be valued for what it enables not what it controls.

[162]  Recommend that "furthering ideals" specify targets, eg. to encourage grads to live up to the ideals, promote ideals to the nation.

[163]  however, you should add after USMA ... and the extended West Point Family (from Goals).

[164]  Besides support for the Academy, the Association should also provide support to alumni.

[165]  This is an excellent statement. But "ideals" seems fuzzy, because it means different things to individuals. I would substitute "Mission" for "ideals." The mission statement, once it is finished, will lead towards a clear purpose.

[166]  Keep the Long Gray Line intact. Install pride and support from grads.

[167]  As an organization of and for grads, we better have some purpose for ourselves

[168]  What about supporting graduates in their several situations?

[169]  to maintain an on-going connection between graduates and the Academy, and vice versa.

[170]  Welfare is a passive word and makes me think of a new social progam. Replace "welfare" with wording similar to "continued success and future strength"

[171]  Use active verb and add a modifier(s) e.g. The Assoc, dedicated to furthering the ideals & promoting the welfare of the USMA, strengthens bonds between the AOG & USMA and provides services to the members.

[172]  This statement is too vague, does not focus the organization on what it should be doing and does not allow anyone to judge progress. I believe the association should promote comraderie amongst and further the interests of its graduates, while promoting the ideals of the Academy.

[173]  Global motherhood. OK for long term, but laks short term emphasis. Hard to get emotional about. Example from a local company's division that was in financial trouble. "Renew the Lease" Posed on the Building Entry, this was something everyone could understand and support.

[174]  should probably be more explicit about the support of the alumni vs the institution

[175]  How are the ideals of usma determined? What broad methods /measures will be used to guide the association in achieving its purpose?

[176]  I would add the phrase, "in its support of duty, honor, country." The term "ideals" seems a bit vague to me.

[177]  Yes, but: The Association is a dedicated active link between the graduates and West Point which furthers the Military Academy's ideals and promotes its welfare.

[178]  Which ideals?---What is the welfare of USMA?

[179]  Should have a "why" or "so-what" statement in there.

[180]  And it's graduates

[181]  Support to graduates and serve as a focus of alumni activities.

[182]  The AOG belongs to and serves the Graduates

[183]  Need long discussion and analysis to respond.

[184]  Considering the services that AOG is providing, I feel that the phrase "and its graduates" should be added after Academy. After all, the programs listed at Question 19 do not promote the welfare of the Academy; they promot the welfare of its graduates.

[185]  Should elaborate on "the ideals".

[186]  ongoing support for graduates

[187]  It should focus on how we further the ideals and promote. Volunteer? Support of USMA training? Financial?

[188]  The name of the organization is Association of Graduates. Accordingly, the focus of the organization should be the graduates and other members. Of course that group of people ought to be centered around USMA and the two objectives set forth above, but the centyral focus needs to be the people.

[189]  we should not further ideals; rather we should preserve ideals which garnered the Academy the reputation it has (had). Old Corps. If a kid wants to go to a progressive school, let him go to a liberal puke college. If he wants to become a man in short order, ready to accept challenges in the Army, then West Point should be the clear decision.

[190]  Furthering contacts among graduates.

[191]  Should also include providing services to graduates themselves.

[192]  Reference to grads - i.e. furthering communication between grads, and/or improving graduate relations with each other and with the academy

[193]  "The Association shall be dedicatd to furthering the ideals of 'Duty, Honor, Country', and promoting the welfare of the United States Miltary Academy, it's Cadets and graduates.

[194]  which ideals? How to promote? Based on what input?

[195]  add ideals "and traditions," and promoting

[196]  omits any references to the graduates

[197]  Isn't this subject under study now? I have already submitted suggestions to the appropriate class offices. However, I would add to the mission a statement to the effect " ..to increase the participation and knowledge of all graduates in West Point affairs via all communication possibilities, especially e-mail.."

[198]  Service to graduates should be included. Contacts, gift shop, reunion arrangements, Assembly, information exchange...

[199]  append the words "and its graduates." There should be an emphasis on the people that isn't in the existing mission statement.

[200]  The current statement implies the main, if not only, purpose of the AOG is to further the welfare of the Academy itself as an institution. What about the people who go there? Some focus should be on the students who are in attendance, as well as recruiting others to become cadets, but it seems a good deal more could be done to serve as an effective "alumni" resource. The recent efforts of AOG to help the increasing numbers of graduates who are becoming civilians (whether they wanted to or not, thanks to the Exec. and Legislative branches of our government) or who need an alumni organization to help them in the civilian world should be amplified. I have found through personal experience that the USNA alumni association is much better prepared to assist their graduates with preparation for a civilian career, whether by choice or necessity. AOG is getting better, but with downsizing a fact of life for both the military and the civilian world now, a lot of us USMA grads could use some effective networking tools and mechanisms via our "alumni" organization. COL Roseborough has done a good job of improving this area, but more needs to be done. USMA's mission does not prepare grads or help when they leave uniform because you do not have to interview for a military job, you do not have to prepare a resume, etc.

[201]  Given the Chairman's letter in the Jan/Feb 98 issue of Assembly, is the West Point Fund a part of AOG or a separate organization? It seems that the Chairman has made this point with the structure in his letter. Add "fund raising" to mission or create a mission for WP Fund. It just seems strange that the development portion of AOG does not seem to be a part of AOG. I asked some of my classmates and they wondered about this as well.

[202]  add after USMA: "...and its graduates." AOG needs to help its graduates much as the Texas Aggie group does.

[203]  Doesn't the AOG also promote the welfare of USMA graduates? If not, then why all the graduate services, if so, then perhaps that should be added to the mission statement (see 20 below).

[204]  The statement shoud include promoting the welfare of academy graduates if this is a graduates association.

[205]  I believe the purpose statement should include wording about providing graduates information and resources in order to maintain contact with the Academy.

[206]  Support for graduates.

[207]  I think this provides marginally sufficient focus. What needs to be clarified is how. Most graduates think the AOG exists to collect money. It goes beyond that and AOG needs to sell itself as an organization doing more for the Academy than simply collecting money.

[208]  A portion of the mission statement, should comment on the fact of what West Point produces each year: Leaders of Character who serve the nation.

[209]  We must also promote the welfare and interests of our association members.

[210]  -Assiting graduates -Providing a communication medium for graduates

[211]  ...maintaining the traditions...

[212]  Use better (more concrete) terms than "ideals" and "welfare". State, in simple terms, which ideals and what welfare we as an organization will focus our work. I would recommend instead of ideals, we use terms like scholarship and citizenship. I don't really have a better term off the top of my head for welfare, but I would want to capture the fact that we are trying to keep the academy financially and politically solvent.

[213]  #1 should be USMA #2 should be establish "support network" for USMA graduates in mnany areas

[214]  The statement says nothing about supporting the needs of the graduated Cadets, which seems to be one of its main purposes.

[215]  The mission should include furthering the welfare and fraternity of USMA graduates. Don't just focus on USMA, but focus on graduates, too.

[216]  I would like something in there about futher helping graduates as well as the current cadets

[217]  The assoaciation of graduates should also have a support function for the academy's graduates. The above implies that the services that AOG provides are only fund raisers for the primary goal not services for the graduates for their own sake. AOG needs to also represent the graduates views. For example the AOG needs to actively communicate its views to the Academy's leadership--does AOG agree with critical letter in this week's Army Times?

[218]  What ideals - Duty, Honor, Country? What does AOG do for the graduates?

[219]  ad, "and its graduates" to the end of the statement

[220]  The AOG provides tools and support for graduates in career transition and the purpose statement does not mention improving the welfare of graduates. I feel that something should be added to show that the AOG also provides services to graduates and former cadets along with furthering the ideals and promoting the welfare of USMA itself.

[221]  should also specifically address maintaining contacts and communications between graduates.

[222]  Without knowing exactly what the ideals of the USMA are, I'm not sure that the AOG should have that as its purpose. A more definitive statement would seem appropriate. "Promoting the welfare.." is also fairly fuzzy, and the term "welfare" needs to be replaced with more specific wording. Not trying to be overly critical, but the statement appears antiquated. I get the general idea of the purpose, but perhaps it is time to get more focus?

[223]  The AOG should also promote the welfare of the alumni as well as USMA.

[224]  Our country

[225]  There is no mention of supporting USMA graduates. The AOG does provide many gradauate services and this should also be an important part of its Mission.

[226]  Could be more specific. (note: if this is covered later in the "goals" portion, disregard)

[227]  Mostly, I think it ought to end with "... and our country." However, maybe also add "..., her graduates, and the United States of America." Nit: you could probably shorten "furthering .. and promoting .." to simply "promoting the ideals and welfare...".

[228]  Add "...and its graduates." to the end of the mission statement.

[229]  Delete the statement as written and substitute the following: "The Association shall be dedicated to furthering the ideals of the United States Military Academy, to drawing Graduates together in support of the concepts of Duty, Honor, Country, to preserving the records of Graduates in the service of the nation, to promoting means of communication between Graduates, and to providing the primary link between Graduates and the United States Military Academy.

[230]  Too vague. Specific objectives are more to the point.

[231]  I would add: "...and its graduates." People get together for people's sake. There is no greater joy than to help people or know there is someone you can turn to when you need help. Focusing only on the Academy stands to alienates those who are not in sync with the current political use of that institution.

[232]  I would prefer my contributions to AOG go to people not things. The mission should focus on the people in and from the institution, not the institution itself. I feel I contribute to a construction fund.

[233]  Delete "promoting the welfare" Add: Lobby Congress and the media to support the Service Acadamies as precious assets that need to be supported in the best interests of the Nation. other suitable words are acceptable. The last thing I want to see is that the Aog takes on the mission of propping up the instituition on its own.

[234]  Expand to include service to nation and to graduates. May be included in "ideals" but worth mentioning specifically.

[235]  Think the AOG should also focus on assisting graduates.

[236]  The statement says nothing about doing anything for graduates.

[237]  Restoring the core values that made the Academy and its Graduates stand out.

[238]  The Association shall be dedicated to developing its ability to furthering .....

[239]  I don't know enough to presume to add points. The existing Purpose Statement seems to lack specificity re. "welfare." But maybe that isn't such a bad thing.

[240]  No emphasis on tieing graduates together

[241]  and its graduates.

[242]  Probably need to define purpose, mission, goals, and objectives in order to get valid responses; however, I believe more focus is needed regarding support of academic activities, athletics, cadet activities, etc, etc.

[243]  Maybe "Ideals of its graduates. " Too many new Supes come in with their own set of "ideals" that maybe don't "jive" with the history of the Academy. Maybe the AOG can keep pressure on Supes to keep West Point from becoming just another school.

[244]  Add " and its graduates"

[245]  Provide graduates with updated information about USMA and a means of communicating with other graduates.

[246]  in consonance with the the ideals of duty, honor and country

[247]  More detail. The above is a motherhood statement.

[248]  AOG is a graduate association. Grads should be the first focus and then supporting USMA. Support grads should not just be implied.

[249]  Probably a few words about support of recruiting

[250]  Tough question. No idea really how to answer this one.

[251]  too broad but perhaps it is better left that way

[252]  Sorry, your "No" button would not erase.

[253]  What about the AOG membership. Take care of the people and they will support USMA!!

[254]  Ensuring continuance of thr quality of the Long Gray Line. What is "promoting the welfare"? I would dleete that portion. Furthering the ideals is good.

[255]  Some words in broad statement that include support of graduates, narrowed if thta is thought to be necessary. Some words in succeeding clarification that narrows how AOG does that -- furthering and promoting -- like fund drives, soliciting volunteers, sponsoring, etc. So that we can picture what appropriate activities might be.

[256]  Welfare of its graduates.

[257]  Foster, maintain, and support the continued relationships among members of the long grey line.

[258]  Assistance to the graduates

[259]  I think the AOG should, in addition to the above mission statement, assist in the promotion of its graduates, i.e., job placement and networking. I believe it does these things, but should focus on it more. We are are strong group and should "flex" more or our muscle.

[260]  "The...ideals of the United States Military Academy, supporting the needs of the Academy, and enhancing the bonds that form the fabric of the Long Grey Line."

[261]  I'm not sure where the ideals are to be "furthered" - within the Corps, within American society or where? Likewise, how does the AOG "promote the welfare of the Academy"? - by building buildings, giving money to cadets, lobbying Congress, what? The statement is neither focused nor clear.

[262]  ... and the United States of America.

[263]  It is too vague. I would support a mission statement that truly gives direction and purpose.

[264]  Some added focus on graduates

[265]  Ideals should be spelled out more.

[266]  It needs to define ideals and welfare in more finite terms. Those are lofty and not concrete enough to provide a unified focus...ie too open for multiple intepretations.

[267]  What actions need to be taken on the "outside" ? contact with congress members? Issue support ? Make a list in priority order at the academy / cadet level and communicate it.

[268]  The association should also be concerned with the mission of USMA, and make comment(take issue) if it does not feel that the mission is being properly accomplished. It should not be a green stamp for everything going on at West Point.

[269]  1 Need greater emphasis on educating the public re West Point 2 Also need to specifically mention recruiting of qualified candidates for admission

[270]  Too much like motherhood. The academy needs pro-active support of its existence.

[271]  its graduates and former cadets.

[272]  As a global statement it is ok, but I would like to see specific and detailed "program" goals with milestones and quantified objectives. There must be some way to measure the achievement of the goals of the AOG so we know if we are on course or not.

[273]  More direct focus for 1. The Academy and its programs and 2. Programs for communication and service to graduates, such as job search, etc.

[274]  and the welfare of the graduates.

[275]  Too vague -- doesn't focus on anything.

[276]  Is the purpose really to promote the welfare of USMA, or of it's graduates? There is certainly a difference and stating it would narrow our focus.

[277]  '......and its graduates." Comment: AOG sponsorship of cruises for graduates is great and is an excellent example of "promoting the welfare of graduates". As graduates we hold "ideals" which we believe are important if the welfare of the Academy is to be assured.

[278]  and it's graduates.

[279]  Promoting the ideals of USMA to the public at every opportunity possible. In a nation that asks of each institution, "what have you done for me lately?", it is important to remind the public of the importance of the ideals and the academy. This can be done in many different ways but it is important that a constant presence be established.

[280]  and it's graduates.

[281]  I thought the Association was also supposed to help alumni. If this is true, it should be part of the mission statement. If it is not true, it should be.

[282]  Reference should be made to the graduates of USMA

[283]  1. supporting and encouraging candidacy of highly qualified individuals 2. supporting continued excellence in the overall education experience provided by the Academy 3. provision of services of benefit to graduates

[284]  add and communicate contiuously the State of the Academy to graduates.

[285]  Service to graduates, which the AOG currently provides in many ways, is not articulated explicitly.

[286]  helping its graduates with future service in the military / civilian life.

[287]  after "ideals" add: "of, assisting in the mision of,

[288]  Ideals should be enumerated: -Duty -Honor -Country Otherwise someone can interpret their own ideals as those of the Academy (perhaps some religious or "moral" ideals)

[289]  The 'shall be' should be changed to 'is' - the association is dedicated.... And somewhere, the statement should mention the graduates.

[290]  I find I don't agree with the amount of $$ that are spent on monuments etc around campus when funds are being cut, enrollment decreased ,etc. We'll have a museum without cadets if this continues.

[291]  Graduates

[292]  Should mention supporting cadets and graduates, especially active duty, whether or not they are AOG members.

[293]  1. Encourage graduates to demonstrate and continue the DUTY, HONOR, COUNTRY heritage of service they were taught. 2. Support active duty military and US Gov't civilians in accomplishing the legitimate purposes of the United States.

[294]  fostering communication among graduates and supporters of USMA

[295]  The whole purpose of the academy is service to our country - NOT TO THE ACADEMY!!! DUTY, HONOR, COUNTRY - not Duty Honor, Academy. I whole heartedly disagree with the current mission and AOG purpose statement. I recommend the AOG mission and purpose to be "to unite the graduates of the United States Military Academy to the common purpose of continuing and furthering the ideals of West Point in all aspects of thier lives and society". This includes uniting to uphold West Points ideals and Honor Code (a cadet does not lie cheat or steal or tollerate anyone who does). It is each graduates DUTY to help overcome a corrupt, socialistis, dishonest government.

[296]  There should be some mention of "graduates", maybe at the end of the statement.

[297]  "welfare" sounds out of place, almost like an unenployment program. Possible substitutes are well-being, effectiveness, or success.

[298]  add at the end of the statement "in development of superior career military leaders.

[299]  What's in it for grads?

[300]  "furthering the ideals" is far too vague. The AOG should serve as a central rallying point for graduates; a means for uniting graduates for the purpose of continuous improvement to the Academy and its operations

[301]  By all means the statement should includethe words... "and its Graduates". The AOG's primary focus should be on "promoting the welfare" of the Graduate Body of the USMA.

[302]  could be expanded with a simple ending. . . "in its mission to - - - - - - - - -etc."

[303]  and Graduates.

[304]  I believe that the statement should remain as is with the following addition: "and the American way of life shared with our neighbors throughout the world" to broaden the scope.

[305]  I think it should read: The Association shall be dedicated to furthering the ideals of the United States Military Academy and promoting the welfare of it's Graduates.

[306]  The goals and ideals of USMA should stand alone. Promote understanding of the goals and ideals of USMA might be better terminology. I just get the feeling right now that we would accept change and compromise in order to insure survival. This must not be allowed to happen because the USMA ideals transcend time.

[307]  It needs to be broad, but the devil is in the details ... and in the perception of emphasis among a number of competing sub-elements.

[308]  add: "and its alumni".

[309]  The AOG should state specifically that it is in the fund raising business to support the focus (whatever that may be). The current focus is extremely broad and probably is confusing to AOG members who regularly see requests for funds.

[310]  Simply a syntax change: "The Association of Graduates is dedicated to promoting the welfare and furthering the ideals of the United States Military Academy through a focused effort by graduates on the behalf of all members of the AOG."

[311]  -statement needs clarity and specificity. -recommend it be dissected the way the Supe redid the USMA Mission Statement. -must be a beacon for grads to rally around and stay deeply involved and in touch with their class and their association. -should include those ex-cadets that want to stay in touch with their class.

[312]  The statement is too broad and vague. How does AOG further the ideals? Does it give classes, speeches, ??? What is defined as "the welfare of the USMA"? Cadets? Physical plant? Instructors?

[313]  This purpose seems to leave out a major segment of what the AOG does and that is to support its alumni. Perhaps that comes in as 'furthering the ideals' but that is not clear at all. I suggest that the purpose be tied to the academy mission statement. At the time I was a cadet the mission statement, as I recall it, was, "To prepare Army officers for a lifetime of service to the Nation." Perhaps the AOG purpose should be: "To support the United States Military Academy in preparing military officers for and its alumni in providing a lifetime of service to the Nation." The wording is not clean but it links the AOG with the USMA mission and ties the AOG to support of alumni as they pursue their own lifetime of service. Since the USMA mission statement changes the purpose of the AOG may need to change but lifetime support of alumni needs to be pretty clear.

[314]  "furthering the ideals of USMA:" ...sounds like we have a Big Brother program to take young junior and high school boys and girls under our wings to instill Duty, Honor, and Country in them.... "promoting the welfare of USMA:" ...sounds like we are ringing bells on street corners to collect money to give to USMA for some reason.... Need something specific, or eliminate the "Purpose Statement" as it serves no purpose. Go straight to the list of "What AOG is gonna do this year."

[315]  AND ITS GRADUATES!!!

[316]  The association will further the ideals and mission of the United States Military Academy by promoting and supporting alumni and other groups of like-minded people and by coordinating compatible special projects and fund-raising activities.

[317]  rather vague is it not???

[318]  We, graduates, should always relate our duty to the Unites States. Normally, the goals of USMA and USA are one of the same, but it is poor form not to prioritize our service to that of the Country.

[319]  Helping graduate contribute to our nation

[320]  I don't know what its ideals currently are or whether they have changed during the Clinton administration.

[321]  Shouldn't the Association be promoting the welfare of the Graduates as well as the cadets.

[322]  Not certain at this point, but the purpose, as stated, does not convey ANY respect for fundamental principles. As stated, the statement could be used to justify just about anything that any wag could dream up. A business with a similar purpose would likely be characterized by a state of general confusion.

[323]  Too general in nature. Sounds too much like the West Point Protective Association!

[324]  How about some reference to information to or with graduates as a means of attaining the idealistic goals stated above.

[325]  Add "promoting the welfare of the United States Military Academy and its graduates" AOG should also promote the USMA to the American public. They don't really know much about West Point and its graduates.

[326]  Communications with/among graduates

[327]  Promoting comraderie among graduates

[328]  The purpose statement avoids any mention of grads. Thus, it gives the impression that the AOG is an arm of the Academy's administration. Judging from all the communications I have received over the years (except travel offers), that impression is not wrong!

[329]  "and molding its members into a cohesive, informed body motivated to publicize the character and contributions of the Academy to the Nation." (or something to that effect).

[330]  The mission should reflect that an association of graduates should first focus on being for the graduates and second on the academic institution. The current mission implies that the only reason to do things in the direct interest of graduates is so that the graduates will then do something in return for USMA.

[331]  What about supporting and promoting the welfare of USMA graduates?

[332]  First, am not in any information loop right now to be able to tell you what West Point is doing today to prepare graduates to lead soldiers into combat. These type of overarching comments can fit at the macro level...but they do not do a bunch for me....I owe you an answer on what it ought to be........maybe you need it to be this broad to capture all the folks that need to be drawn in.

[333]  The statement is so vague it is almost meaningless. Suggest something like: "advise and assist the Superintendent and the staff and facult of the United States Military Academy in its primary mission to produce leaders, most particularly combat leaders, for the United States Army.

[334]  Lack of definitions--ideals, promoting--etc.

[335]  The statement is overly broad. The association of GRADUATES should focus more on, well, graduates. There is already a massive support structure for the academy itself.

[336]  Although I know the Association is dedicated to the graduates, the mission statement does not mention them, only the Academy. This is not necessarilly implicit.

[337]  How about some reference to welfare of graduates?

[338]  ...and (welfare) USMA graduates throughout their professional career(s)."

[339]  "and further the concept of unifying or coalescing the graduates into an organization that supports both the Alma MAter andd the graduates". There is a perception that the AOG is too selfcentered and a selfserving.

[340]  promoting ... "the ability of the USMA to produce combat leaders and career officers for the United States Army." The statement should in no uncertain way indicate support for CAREER officership training (GROUND forces) and US national defense (as opposed to support of the "ole Oak Bucket U" regardless of modifications and other fundamental changes MADE by "ole Oak Bucket U"). If WP is to survive in the long run, perhaps we DO need to reconsider commissioning into the combat arms only, perhaps even (gasp!) reverting to male-only. On the present course toward a super-rich and highly glorified ROTC program, even I have trouble supporting USMA's existance. My career swan song, by the way, was three years as an ROTC Brigade Commander.

[341]  AOG does far more than promote the Military Academy. It also supports and assists graduates--as individuals.

[342]  More focus on assistance of graduates with services most needed.

[343]  There is nothing in here about what graduates can do to help eachother, I'm afraid that most graduates don't necessary relate to the AOG because they feel they have very little to gain from it other than a hand in their pocket. While development is a key function of the AOG, I'd rather see the development activities as an extention of a mission more focused on building the community of graduates, rather than simply as a mouthpiece of the Academy's development agenda. Just my $.02. Build community between graduates and the development will follow.

[344]  Something in reference of supporting other graduates. To me an association of graduates primary concern should be the graduates themselves.

[345]  Supporting the Academy in obtaining and developing candidates to become the backbone of the Army's leadership in the future.

[346]  Promoting the welfare of USMA - are we more interested in a focus on the welfare of the cadets as the institution or the physical plant as the institution? We spend a lot of time doing the physical . . .

[347]  The phrase "be dedicated" is redundant and fairly useless. Simplify the statement to "The Association shall further the ideals and promote the welfare of the United States Military Academy."

[348]  Since many of the services that AOG offers are aimed at graduates (rather than USMA itself), I recommend adding the phrase "and its graduates" after the last word in the statement.

[349]  It is one sided in present form and should include language referring to "Graduates" of USMA as well.

[350]  I have a problem with the term "welfare". It has become somewhat corrupted in its current usage. Perhaps the term "viability" or some other word would be better.

[351]  Would like AOG to consider expanding charter to include adding "support to USMA graduates".

[352]  How about serving the graduates? I know you do this, but mission statement focuses to much on promoting the welfare of USMA, ie the Supe. You could and should serve as a forum to keep gratuates more fully informed about the big and small picture so they can be informed spokesmen for USMA. There also has been too much emphasis on raising money.

[353]  While the Academy is clearly dedicated to service to the Nation, the AOG statement should also explicitly state that goal with commitment to the ideals and welfare of the Academy being the means of accomplishing that end. To an outsider, the current goal statement might appear too self-serving for West Point and West Pointers.

[354]  See above. Statement does not provide me with the relationship between me and AOG.

[355]  The point of having an Association of Graduates is to be the link that bonds the graduates together and to the school.

[356]  "shall be" states something that will be done only in the future but does not address the present. "Furthering the ideals and promoting the welfare" is too vague. Put some action behind the statement.

[357]  There should be a phrase directed at affecting all of society with West Point's ideals. The current wording implies, by not mentioning scope, that furthering the ideals of West Point is targeted at the Army only.

[358]  should included preserving past history and proving guidance and direction for the future of the USMA

[359]  Which ideals? Duty, Honor Country? Military Careerism? Soldier-Statesmen? Who defines the "welfare" of USMA? Is it money? Positive Press? Just criticism? Perhaps something similar to : Fostering fellowship and ties to USMA among Graduates and Former Cadets; promoting moral, financial, and educational support for USMA, and working with the staff and faculty to support the Mission of USMA. Admittedly, this is rough, but I think that more precision would be helpful.

[360]  What are the areas of welfare to be supported?

[361]  Include phrase about promoting contact with graduates to assist them.

[362]  graduates should be included; ideals/creed of duty, honor, country should be included.

[363]  "...The United States Military Academy..AND IT'S GRADUATES."

[364]  Delineate specific areas of concern: The graduates;the parents of cadets;the physical plant and the private moneys needed for that.

[365]  Something to the effect of "keeping graduates involved in..." or "providing graduates a means to suport..." "...the development and welfare of USMA."

[366]  What about the welfare of its graduates?

[367]  -welfare of fellow graduates -welfare of family members of deceased graduates -welfare of cadets

[368]  The statement does not go far enough. It's focus has to include servicing the graduates, either as individuals or as a class. Much of this is done by the local societies and class organizations, but the AOG has an interface in this aspect also.

[369]  Please add: "and its graduates."

[370]  Perhaps the statement should include taking care of the old grads?

[371]  so what? this motivates not actions other than philosophizing. are you a fundraiser? is AOG a funnel of grad experience to USMA realities? is AOG a communication tool?

[372]  ...Military Academy and its Graduates.

[373]  Graduate activities in addition to the statement above

[374]  Furthering the ideals is very fluffy. I would unfluff it.

[375]  1. Provide mechanism for communication between academy & grads. 2. provide support structure for graduated class organizations.

[376]  what about adding something about networking alumni...

[377]  The ideals and purpose of the USMA appears to be changing. I should probably read up on what the Supe has to say; however, since I do not, I am not sure what the focus of USMA is currently.

[378]  Add: Defending the existence of...

[379]  add "and its graduates."

[380]  helping graduates help each other

[381]  Needs another focus to promoting graduates who are professionally working in the civilian world

[382]  We are an association of GRADUATES, not USMA, itself. As a MEMBERSHIP organization, our purpose should be to support the membership, in consonance with the ideals, mission, and goals of USMA.

[383]  "....its graduates, families of deceased graduates, friends and supporters."

[384]  Please consider adding something about contributing the Army, or service to the country.

[385]  Emphasis should be added with respect to supporting USMA GRADUATES. After all, AOG is supposed to be an ASSOCIATION OF GRADUATES, not necessarily an association of USMA supporters. If the GRADUATES were supported better, maybe the GRADUATES would more actively participate in AOG activities and then would possibly better support USMA more actively as well.

[386]  ... by keeping its Members, elected officials, and the American Public informed, in cooperation with the Superintendent, of the needs, achievements and goals of the U.S. Military Academy.

[387]  While I think it is well and good to promote the welfare of the academy ( and I believe given some of the changes in recent years, there is reason to be concerned about the future of the academy!), I think the Association needs to be concerned with the graduates themselves, both on active duty and in private endeavors. One of the biggest myths in the Army is the existance of a WPPA. I personally feel that West Point graduates suffer from benign neglect if anything to avoid the "appearance of favoritism". I think the Association should be the graduates advocate.

[388]  Keeping alumni informed of WP happenings and class activities.

[389]  It should include promoting the welfare of graduates.

[390]  Too vague and general, get more specific in a limited focus.

[391]  More specifics on the "hows"

[392]  Actually, I may agree - but the question is a b it heavy to respond to quickly.

[393]  comraderie among its graduates, maybe

[394]  Should include something for: 1. Graduates still on active duty. 2. Graduates who have left active duty.

[395]  uniting the Academy's graduates

[396]  and its graduates.

[397]  Could add "and its graduates"

[398]  add " .. and its grads"

[399]  May want to mention the means by which you expect to achieve this.

[400]  I like the way the AOG has progressed in the past few years...I like the initiatives that have been taken to bring the Cadets, WPS's, Classes, WPPC's and Friends of West Point into the fold! We've done all of this with the Mission as stated. So, I personnaly have no problem with the Mission as stated...but, there appear to be many who want to wordsmith the Mission; I believe that a new Mission will be developed!

[401]  We need to add something about furthering the and promoting the welfare of graduates, especially in the area of networking, and Army/Navy Game activities, and other social meetings.

[402]  ...promoting the welfare of the United States Military Academy and of its graduates.

[403]  To me "welfare" implies mediocrity. I think we need a stronger description here...more like margin of excellence

[404]  Mutual Suport amon Graduates

[405]  Unfortunately, the problem with the Purpose Statement is not that more should be added; it is that nearly anything that could be done in the context of USMA can be justified under this purpose. In other words, if a pirpose statement is supposed to help "focus" resources towards a "finite" direction, this purpose statement is too broad. If by promoting the welfare of USMA, for example, we mean doing all we can to keep it a vital, significant, "federally-funded" educational institution, then maybe we should say that. If we mean spreading the Acadamy's values of Duty, Honor, Country throughout low-income high schools, then maybe we should say that. Of course, every time you become more concrete with what you actually want to do, you run the risk of upsetting folks. But since resources are limited and decisions on how to distribute them must be made (or nothing gets done), some folks will upset anyway. I think the dialogue can only strengthen the AOG.

[406]  I think that the AOG can be a bit more specific about its definition of "ideals" and "welfare".

[407]  support for members of the Association, particulary older grads in need of assistance

[408]  Is AOG primarily focused on promoting the Academy or are the other equally important goals--prividing info and services to Grads?

[409]  Is AOG primarily focused on promoting the Academy or are the other equally important goals--prividing info and services to Grads?

[410]  Is welfare the right word for USMA? Promote the " institution of the USMA in its service to the Army and the Nation"

[411]  Think AOG should have a more long term view of the Academy as a plant (factory) and a short term view of supports the cadets and alumni.

[412]  Enhancing the brothership and comraderie of graduates. To facilitate network development and support of graduates as they progress through their careers.

[413]  serving the alumni community while forstering and supporting the ideals and goals of USMA. Question: Welfare seems like an ambiguous term and out of date as well.

[414]  You should add something about promoting graduates to work together after graduation, both militarily and in civil works.

[415]  Statement is too vague. Need specific details on how AOG augments appropriated fund support to USMA.

[416]  Should contain an explicit reference to graduates in addition to the Academy itself.

[417]  I think that something should be in the statement which reflects a means by which graduates can maintain contact with one another...graduates helping graduates...graduates talking with graduates...etc.

[418]  Since the organization is an "Association of Graduates", some focus on supporting the graduates themselves should be included.

[419]  Add "and its graduates."

[420]  Don't think that it emphasizes "graduates" enough. I think it should be a tool for furthering GRADUATES' objectives rather than USMA's. There is currently a schism between what many graduates desire and the current policies of USMA.

[421]  add words to effect of supporting its graduates as well

[422]  Don't beleive mission statements serve any purpose because they must be too general to be of any use.

[423]  The long grey line appears in every profession and level of society, from successful to struggling, employed to looking, wealthy to not-there-yet. Association of Graduates should look beyond the confines of USMA and be a huge pool of support for those needing it and talent for those seeking it. The mission statement, as well as the activities of the AOG should take this need into account.

[424]  no mention of alumni which should be the focus. Assistance to the military academy will be the outcome of a strong AOG, but not the raison-d'etre.

[425]  and its alumni ?

[426]  Statement if focused on the Academy, not the graduates. The Academy already has a mission statement.

[427]  the How? to further and promote

[428]  add the words "and its graduates"

[429]  Purpose statement does not seem to provide anything for its members other than their association with USMA. Somehow the focus should return to the membership and not USMA>

[430]  "Ideals" should be spelled out as Duty, Honor, and Country. Change "...promoting the welfare of the United States Military Academy." to "... ensuring that the United States Military Academy remains the premiere instituation for providing commissioned officers of character and dedication to the United States Army."

[431]  Should include a statement including the graduates of USMA

[432]  " . . . and its graduates."

[433]  we should have as part of our purpose the improvement of graduates of the Academy.

[434]  AOG SHOULD ASSIST GRADS WITH TRANSITION TO CIVILIAN JOBS/ LIFE.

[435]  The AOG should support the ideals and principles espoused by USMA. It should also support cadet intercollegiate and extracurricular activities. IT SHOULD NOT SUPPORT THE ACADEMY'S ACADEMIC OR MILITARY TRAINING FUNCTIONS. THESE ARE THE RESPONSIBILITY OF THE U.S. GOVERNMENT. SHOULD WE INCLUDE THOSE AREAS, THEN WE WEAKEN OUR ABILITY TO FOCUS ON THE AREAS WHERE WHE CAN BE MOST EFFECTIVE. WE SHOULD NOT BE USED AS A MEANS OFF ADDITIONAL FINANCIAL SUPPORT FOR THE BASIC MISSION OF THE ACADEMY.

[436]  Difficult to determine from what perspective this statement is coming from; graduate, cadet, educator, citizen?

[437]  Something about, "and its graduates". Part of AOG should be focused on assisting graduates, and make that a stated fact.

[438]  AOG should help grads, not just promote the Academy. Be active in supporting grads in transititon, in business, in campaigns, etc.

[439]  I believe more financial support of WP by its graduates will become necessary as the Fed Govt decreases its commitment to the military. If the second part of the mission is sufficiently broad enough to permit the above, no change is necessary. If there is disagreement among our graduates that the mission says nothing about such financial support, then lets change it now. We are at a point where our stature as a premier institution can falter to a point it may not be able to recover.

[440]  add "and its graduates."

[441]  promote the welfare of the graduates.

[442]  AOG does a great job promoting West Point and works well to keep the graduates informed of class activities and concerns. I would like to see more of a statement about supporting the ideals of the United States Military Academy in its dedication to a strong Army and Nation. I have an aversion to any goal statement that talks about promoting the welfare of an organization. Just a personal preference.

[443]  It should be oriented more to "graduates" and less to the academy.